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This is probably a problem on my part, as I was advised early on that I need to cut down on the mountains of words a bit and have some actual stuff to do.
I've been trying to do that, and provide interesting scenarios, but I guess if you don't like reading lots of words, maybe it's not for you? I came into the Aeseriq side imagining him as a very loquacious individual who enjoys the sound of his own voice, and characterized him as being very expository-aligned. If the general consensus is this makes for dry updates, I wish to point out I've been trying to give much more choices that are actually choices, to try and give something interesting to do.
I wish I had read this earlier, because looking back on my last few updates, I am still doing a lot of exposition I could probably have skipped unless asked about it. Bleh.
Does anyone else thing this is too wordy? Should I embrace brevity for this quest?
>>103206
That is a lot of philosophical questions, and some of what you're asking me is not maybe as relevant as you might think? I do not believe Aeseriq cares much about the details of the universe outside of his personal plans and activities. Answering these questions would require a lot of exposition, and I feel like I am already struggling to keep people's attention when I only touch on things relevant to the story.
>>103199
That's a complicated question to answer, but one thing I've been mostly ignoring because it wasn't important is people keep calling Aeseriq a demon, which he specifically refers to himself as a daemon. I will admit, when I started this story, I had only a vague idea of the general cosmology of the afterlife/underworld, and sort of generically assigned the D&D standard of Demon/Daemon/Devils (Chaotic Evil, Neutral Evil, Lawful Evil). I have since discarded that after some thought to integrate them into the world setting I had previously, as seen in another quest I did that is currently on indefinite hiatus.
I don't mind fleshing it out more, but again, I start to worry about how much I'm writing, because I am already getting complaints this quest has too many words..
As for Graezzit, I planned to make the non-picked character an antagonist against the one we did pick, but maybe there will be some sections with him, if people want it.
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